Ted Hughes' Full Moon and Little
Frieda: Critique and Analysis
This is rightly one of Hughes’s
most popular poems and he has called it a favorite one of his poetry. The
beauty and aptness of its movement could never have been predicted from most of
the poems in The Hawk in the Rain—even The Thought-Fox’ is mechanical in
comparison. It is rare to find such freedom of line accompanied by such
appropriateness and inevitability, so that it seems to have a form as tight as
a sonnet—the whole evening in one long line, the listening child who is the
focus of it in a balancing short one; the ‘mirror’ poised between the
water of which it is composed and the star that it reflects; the herd of cows
in a long, lazy line that nevertheless doesn’t fall apart.
The humor that belongs to the wonder is there throughout: in ‘tempt’; in the cows being communally the river and individually the bouldersthat impede its progress; and above all in the final two lines, where something of the artist’s wonder at the life of his work, the moon’s ancient divinity, the child’s suddenness and wholeness of attention, combine in a delicacy of suggestion that really does defy analysis. But what the poem’s subtext reveals is the innocence of the Frieda contrasted with the experience of her father as the very first lines form the keynote:
“A
cool small evening shrunk to a dog bark and the clank of a bucket -
And you listening.
A spider’s web, tense for the dew’s touch”
And you listening.
A spider’s web, tense for the dew’s touch”
The evening has shrunk not only
because the light is failing but also because, as it does so, time seems to
slow down, as it approaches that crucial moment of nightfall, dewfall, the
first tremor of the first star. And the poet is aware that his daughter is the
hand; pointing to that moment because she is utterly open, without defenses,
without distracting consciousness of past and future, to the scene, her fine web
of senses perfectly tuned to it, tense as a spider’s web, brimming as a lifted
pail. The cows, too, are part of the scene, the condensation from their ‘warm
wreaths of breath’ falling like dew on the hedges, their udders brimming like
the pail of water, their blood like a river flowing darkly through,
bringing fertility, their bony haunches like boulders ballasting the moment,
balancing its fragility and delicacy with permanence and solidity. Perhaps it
needs the child to register and hold all this because the poet cannot open
himself, cannot jettison his knowledge of past and future, his knowledge that
blood can be spilled as easily as milk and run in rivers outside the body, that
boulders in a river are dangerous, that darkness is dangerous, that the moon is
a fickle murderous goddess. The poem as we have it holds all this at bay,
submerges all darker knowledge which might disturb the perfect harmony of man
and nature the child experiences.
“Moon!’ you cry suddenly, ‘Moon! Moon!’
The moon has stepped back like an artist gazing amazed at a work
That points at him amazed”
The moon has stepped back like an artist gazing amazed at a work
That points at him amazed”
The persona of “Full Moon and
Little Frieda” views the child as a “mirror,” a brimming pail of offering, who
gazes at the moon, the largest reflecting object in the cosmos available to the
naked eye. The resulting astonishment at the recognition of an identity of
mirroring artworks is very striking and describes another experience of the
undifferentiated original essence of the cosmos, at times called by Buddhist
poets the “full moon of suchness.” When little Frieda speaks the word “moon,”
one of the first words she ever articulated as a toddler, subject and
object, self and environment merge in ecstatic recognition of self-in-other, in
the clarity of spotless, mutually reflecting mirrors. The cows that loop the
hedges “with their warm wreaths of breath” earlier in the poem convey an almost
nativity-scene sense of the purity and supportiveness of a benign nature in
attendance. The cows, sacred in Oriental symbology as representations of theplenitude of
creation, are an apt background for Frieda’s offering of self as a brimming
pail of youthful purity to an equally pure moonlight. In ‘Full Moon and Little
Frieda’, for the first time, there is a moment of harmony.
The poem testifies in its
delicacy of utterance, its utterly fresh sense of wonder, to the possibility of
knowing ‘the redeemed life of joy’ in normal daily experience, when, with an
unspectacular access of grace, the elements of a scene - human, animal,
domestic, rural, cosmic - suddenly cohere to express a plenitude, all the
‘malicious negatives’ miraculously melted away. There is no self-consciousness
to close her, she points at the moon with an amazement the moon can only
reciprocate, like an artist whose work has come to life or perfectly reflects
the life of its creator who has created innocent and experience at the same
time. But the conflict goes hand in hand where The river of blood, can actually
be a river, but he's personifying this river into the lives of himself and
Frieda , and the dark past they've since had to overcome (Sylvia's suicide) .
So he's saying how dangerous it is, with boulders and blood. But then he says
it's balancing unspilled milk, saying that for this moment, this peaceful
moment in the country, life is balanced, it's calm. Their bond (which
must be strong after withstanding everything the two have gone through) is so
great, and the moment that they're in is so beautiful, that even the moon stood
back in awe. The poem is really picturesque and imagist along with the theme of
masculinity:
“A pail lifted, still and brimming—mirror
To tempt a first star to a tremor”
To tempt a first star to a tremor”
The theme of masculinity versus
femininity is continued with some of the imagery in Full Moon and Little
Frieda. For example, the pail full of water is described as a
"mirror", an object which usually has feminine connotations. The full
phrase has possible religious implications -"mirror/ To tempt a first star
to tremor." The specific use of the word "tempt" could suggest
the temptation of Eve in The Bible. With the religious and nature imagery
in both poems, this is not surprising. As Eve arguably caused the rift between
mankind and nature, feminists would undoubtedly argue that Hughes is trying to
blame women for this rift. However, I believe that Hughes is presenting us with
the repair of the relationship between mankind and nature.
I think this is a crucial poem in
the Hughes’ canon – one of his most arresting, strange, and moving.
Central to Hughes’ poetic vision is the extraordinary strangeness,
otherness, of nature, and the miracle of our complex response to it. And this
poem presents that most directly. This is a tremendous moment,
because Little Frieda is either responding to the moon or to the cows, and
there’s no way of telling which. She’s just giving a response so human, so
innocent, so touching, that it transforms everything, tying together the earth
and the heavens, instinctively, naturally and miraculously. Frieda’s cry
transforms and fulfils the whole scene. It is a miracle, a true miracle, by
which humanity understands, recognizes and blesses this strange nature which is
otherwise so alien.
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